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Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Sat Jun 22, 2013 3:19 pm

This is the prologue. The new and improved one. I had a bit of help with it, so I won't take all of the credit. Tell me what you guys think.

         It has been almost thirteen years since the dragon wars came to a brutal and bloody close.

         The war had split the Fabled Dragon Paladins into two separate factions: one group served under the malicious Dark Paladin; the other army backed the heroes Zorn and Zila, wielders of Parantheon and Paranthia, the two most powerful blades known to exist. This war completely decimated the paladins, leaving only the leaders of each side alive for the final confrontation.

         Zorn and Zila escaped to a village of wood-elves known as Sharrily, where it is believed there son was born. Hiding with elves, however, did not save them as they had hoped, for the Dark Paladin discovered their location, and summoned forth a huge tornado to destroy the entire village.

         The heroic couple fought with all of their might, but-despite their incredible, magical prowess-they were unable to save themselves from the great tempest.

         As the two lay dying alongside their dragons, they cast their final spell, releasing the blades into a void where they would remain until their true heir, a warrior whose strength and courage matched that of Zorn and Zila's, appeared.

         And so the elves wrote a prophecy that spread throughout all of Halione:

                He who can best the dragons of old,

                And learns to bring them forth,

                Shall be the one who will behold,

                The power that split the North.

         As the Dark Paladin discovered what had happened, his fury spiked, and, as he stood over the limp bodies of the fallen heroes, he sent three acres of the forest up in flames, never to be seen again.

         For years, warriors have scoured the lands in search of Parantheon-the sword of dragon's fang-and Paranthia-the sword of dragon's wing.

         But now, the time has come for the prophecy to be fulfilled. The swords have waited over a decade for a new master, and he, though not power hungry, is about to receive the greatest responsibility in the world...

Well, that's it. I'd like to thank Jesse for his help. He deserves credit. So, any comments? What did you guys think?
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Sat Jun 22, 2013 5:08 pm

I'll post a chapter or two every couple of weeks maybe. Just to make myself feel better.
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by RinYukihara on Sun Jun 23, 2013 2:44 pm

Nice. Get working. xD
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Sun Jun 23, 2013 2:54 pm

Thanks, I will. Your two actual chapters are Chapters 10 and 11. So, I have a ways too go before you see what I changed your chapters into.
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:04 pm

but I'm going to post on Klok's site, and then paste it over here. That way I don't have to type each chapter twice...
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by RinYukihara on Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:44 pm

Alright. And what do you mean my chapters are 10 and 11?
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Sun Jun 23, 2013 4:04 pm

"Rinn's big fight scene" takes 2 chapters. I've changed a lot, to. I could post it here, if you want, but you don't kill the "enemy" that I had originally planned for you. I could post it here, so you can see it, but you might get a little lost. It gets kind of mushy... Kind of...
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by RinYukihara on Sun Jun 23, 2013 11:13 pm

I'd rather see everything in order, but thanks. xD
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Re: Prologue to my book

Post by Parantheon on Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:12 am

No prob. I'll probably post chapters 2 and 3 this week.
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