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The Dark Side

Post by Parantheon on Wed Feb 12, 2014 8:03 pm

I have a little story that I've been kind of working on for couple of weeks now. It's called The Dark Side, and it's a horror story placed in first person. Once I find the little excerpt I had written in class, I'll post it here.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by Parantheon on Wed Feb 12, 2014 8:22 pm

Found it. This is basically just a preshow of the book, I guess...

The Dark Side is a deep, dark, desolate place, from where one can never truly escape. There is no true definition for the Dark Side, for no one outside of its reality has ever seen it. It is believed to be a prison within the mind, used for criminals of the worst kind in the old days, their own personal limbo, a hellhole, if you will.
My name is Jason Rigel Marks, called Jay by my friends. I had always heard stories of the Dark Side, curiosity crawling from mouths of the poor and homeless. There have been so many different descriptions that is hard to know which description is the most accurate, but it is honestly kind of hard to be accurate about something that not a soul who still lives has ever seen before.


I actually have a chapter written, but it's not the first chapter of the book. This chapter that I have might go into the book around like the twelfth chapter. If you still want me to put it up here anyway, I will.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by RinYukihara on Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:23 am

Ooh. Interesting! Very Happy
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by Parantheon on Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:38 pm

Yeah. I've already started on an area of the book where Jason first visits the Dark Side. But when he comes back to the real world, no one believes what he says. I'll eventually post more.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by RinYukihara on Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:49 pm

Ooh, sounds even sweeter.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by Parantheon on Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:54 pm

Yeah. Its basically an alternate reality. The first time he sees it is a fluke. he's actually asleep and he can feel something watching him from within the eternal darkness.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by RinYukihara on Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:56 pm

Nice. o: I'm planning something sorta similar for Dusk Online.
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Re: The Dark Side

Post by Parantheon on Fri Feb 14, 2014 12:59 pm

Awesome dude. can't wait to hear about it.
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